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Thursday, 28 November 2019

Camp writing

Walt: write for a specific audience



Dear future campers. Camp Bentzon is a place you will be calling home for the next few days, This camp is the best camp you will have on being a year 6. This is a place with wildlife so we got to be respectful because the weka there will eat the rubbish and die. When you go swimming you got to be aware that there could be stingray so if you leave them alone they will do you no harm. Another thing just do no graffiti because that is just wrong.in this paragraph i will be showing 5 top tips for camp so you can have a better time.

My first tip for you is about the ferry when you are on the ferry you have to sit down at all times hold your hats and keep your arms inside the rail because if your hat falls no ones going to get it for you? When you go on the ferry you must not run around because you could bump into a person of the [public that are on there.

My second tip is about the morning when you wake in the morning you have to try not to make any noise because if you make loud noises before the trumpet goes off then you will have to sit outside on the grass no matter what your wearing. When you wake in the morning roll over and go back to sleep because you will get woken up by a loud trumpet why because Mr Somervile will be up at 5:30 stay sleepy?.

My third tip is about eating when you go to eat you should have your water battle because you won't have a drink. Also when you go to eat you must have footwear on because they said so. If you want to have food first you gotta be the best group no shouting and no hitting cutlery. Also grab things that you are going to eat and don’t be greedy.

My fourth tip is about killer hill when you are going up you have to what your step or else you might hurt yourself when your going up make sure you have also when you are going down they say your “bum is your brake” that means when you run down and
your going so fast that you can’t stop you have to jump on you bum so it will slow you down.


And my final tip is about camp itself have fun try your best to be good and when you are asked to do something do so you won't have to be told of. Also respect the p-lace have a good time and enjoy try everything because not every gets to do the staff you are going to do.




Task description:  We went to camp then came back and we had to write about our experience. 













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