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Fortnite is the best game in the world there is season 8 it is the best season i hope i get a ps4 so i can play it  but i don't so sad, when ever i play fortnite i ask people if they want to vs me in a build battle but they say no i think it is because they don’t want to lose to me because i am the king at fortnite. If someone wants to vs me my name is east gamingpro on fortnite no spaces or capitals I personally think fortnite is cool because I just like playing challenging other people that play, seeing a lot of different skins and dance moves . I am so good at this game that I even beat the best player in the world NINJA My favourite emote is dance moves, like dun dun dun BOOP den dun dun dun dun” so cool! I only died like 3 or 10 times and that's all. I have over 1000 wins in the game  and my favourite fortnite youtuber is obviously tfue.  I beat lots of twitch people on fortnite. That's why i think im so good. I beat about 200 twitch streamers, like I’m really good. Then i was in  match with NINJA we were playing playground mode. We were doing a building consents NINJA And  TFUE was having a big battel.NINJA was winning but then TFUE started building up his game then TFUE.won the end.   

WALT. punctuate our work




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Fortnite is the best game in the world there is season 8 it is the best season i hope i get a ps4 so i can play it, but i don't so sad, when ever i play fortnite i ask people if they want to vs me in a build battle but they say no, i think it is because they don’t want to lose to me because i am the king at Fortnite. If someone wants to vs me my name is Eastamingpro on fortnite no spaces or capitals I personally think fortnite is cool because I just like playing challenging other people that play, seeing a lot of different skins and dance moves . I am so good at this game that I even beat the best player in the world.. NINJA! My favourite emote is dance moves, like dun dun dun BOOP den dun dun dun dun” so cool! I only died like 3 or 10 times and that's all. I have over 1000 wins in the game  and my favourite fortnite youtuber is obviously tfue.  I beat lots of twitch people on fortnite. That's why i think i'm so good. I beat about 200 twitch streamers, like I’m really good. Then i was in  match with ‘’NINJA’’ we were playing playground mode. We were doing a building consents ‘‘NINJA’’ And ‘‘TFUE’’ was having a big battel.NINJA was winning but then TFUE started building up his game then TFUE . won the end


Task description. today we had to edit our work for what we did yesterday because we wanted to see what we improved our writing . then we went to the mat to post our writing.. 

Wero

Wero

By André Ngāpō

3.Aug.2013

1) “We’ve got the crowd on its feet” What image is the author trying to describe?

> we have the crowd standing  high in the sky

2) The author says that the crowd ‘Claps and cheers’, could you use figurative language to add more detail?

>as loud as a stapned of elephant

3) Try write some examples of figurative language to describe the audience:

> A) Simile: the audience claps very loud

> B) Metaphor: the crowd is as loud as a concert

> C) Hyperbole: there louder than  a staped

4 )Try write some examples of figurative language to describe the girls pukana eyes.

> A) Simile:  the girls had very wide eyes like a colossal squid

> B) Metaphor:  the girls eyes shone brighter then the sun

> C) Hyperbole:the girls eyes shone brighter then the sun

5) Try write some examples of figurative language to describe how Te Ata feels when he feels sick.

> A) Simile: he feels as sick as a dog

> B) Metaphor: he's sick niss is bigger than a elephant

> C) Hyperbole: he's sick niss is bigger than a elephant

Artemis Fowl

WALT: understand figurative and descriptive language as we read.

This is my book that i am reading for school. I really like this book because we



TASK DESCRIPTION: this is a really cool book because it has worlds that are interesting and there are words that i do not know and that  i can learn., hope u enjoy

Screen Cast

 WALT: understand figurative and descriptive language as we read.

This is my story I've been reading for the past couple of weeks hope u enjoy...



TASK DESCRIPTION: This is my story I've been reading for the past couple of weeks  it is called Wero we did this so we cold show readers the story.

paint an image in the readers mind.

WALT: paint an image in the readers mind.

Instructions

First, think of things you can see in this picture.

Then imagine something that fits this scene, but is not in the picture.

Then you are going to write descriptive sentences that describe the scene as a piece of writing.

Three things you can see in this picture			One thing you imagine
Ocean	2. Sand	3. Sky	4.   boats

The beautiful ocean has a turquoise colour that goes to a  point where it stops and goes dark. This beautiful ocean goes as far as the eye can see.

The waves are crashing against the  beautiful sand that is gold ish, and white ish,. The sand is sparkly at a distance as well as the water is to.

The sky looks over this beautiful piece of scenery the sky is light blue and the clouds look as soft as candy floss.

AS the water sits there getting pushed around by the waves the boats speed  around on the water splashing everywhere.

TASK DESCRIPTION we had to write what this scene might look like so when people read it and close there eyes it could paint an image i hope you injoy.

convert units of measurement.

WALT: convert units of measurement.
 

this is my maths task i did not do well but i tryed so hope you injoy this.

TASK DESCRIPTION we had to think what the miler meters were and all kind's of mesure ments the hardest one was the last page.