independent & pendent clauses.

WALT: identify and write independent & dependent clauses TASK DESCREPTION: we had to write a independent & pendent story. we had to carry on the sentence.

carecter emotions.

WALT: take charge of our own learning. TASK DESCREPTION: we had to write about what the emotions of the charecter's.

screen cast

TASK DESCREPTION: we had to tell you about our story and record it.

write like a year six.

WALT write like a year six

TASK DESCRIPTION: hi we had to describe what the scenes on each slide looked like but with lots of detail,

Character Emotions

WALT: understand figurative and descriptive language as we read.




this is my task for the week hope you enjoy my character emotions..??





TASK DESCRIPTION :  we had to find people in my story and write down how they felt and how you know. also we had to put what page it was on..??

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Fortnite is the best game in the world there is season 8 it is the best season i hope i get a ps4 so i can play it  but i don't so sad, when ever i play fortnite i ask people if they want to vs me in a build battle but they say no i think it is because they don’t want to lose to me because i am the king at fortnite. If someone wants to vs me my name is east gamingpro on fortnite no spaces or capitals I personally think fortnite is cool because I just like playing challenging other people that play, seeing a lot of different skins and dance moves . I am so good at this game that I even beat the best player in the world NINJA My favourite emote is dance moves, like dun dun dun BOOP den dun dun dun dun” so cool! I only died like 3 or 10 times and that's all. I have over 1000 wins in the game  and my favourite fortnite youtuber is obviously tfue.  I beat lots of twitch people on fortnite. That's why i think im so good. I beat about 200 twitch streamers, like I’m really good. Then i was in  match with NINJA we were playing playground mode. We were doing a building consents NINJA And  TFUE was having a big battel.NINJA was winning but then TFUE started building up his game then TFUE.won the end.   

WALT. punctuate our work




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Fortnite is the best game in the world there is season 8 it is the best season i hope i get a ps4 so i can play it, but i don't so sad, when ever i play fortnite i ask people if they want to vs me in a build battle but they say no, i think it is because they don’t want to lose to me because i am the king at Fortnite. If someone wants to vs me my name is Eastamingpro on fortnite no spaces or capitals I personally think fortnite is cool because I just like playing challenging other people that play, seeing a lot of different skins and dance moves . I am so good at this game that I even beat the best player in the world.. NINJA! My favourite emote is dance moves, like dun dun dun BOOP den dun dun dun dun” so cool! I only died like 3 or 10 times and that's all. I have over 1000 wins in the game  and my favourite fortnite youtuber is obviously tfue.  I beat lots of twitch people on fortnite. That's why i think i'm so good. I beat about 200 twitch streamers, like I’m really good. Then i was in  match with ‘’NINJA’’ we were playing playground mode. We were doing a building consents ‘‘NINJA’’ And ‘‘TFUE’’ was having a big battel.NINJA was winning but then TFUE started building up his game then TFUE . won the end


Task description. today we had to edit our work for what we did yesterday because we wanted to see what we improved our writing . then we went to the mat to post our writing.. 

Wero

Wero

By André Ngāpō

3.Aug.2013

1) “We’ve got the crowd on its feet” What image is the author trying to describe?

> we have the crowd standing  high in the sky

2) The author says that the crowd ‘Claps and cheers’, could you use figurative language to add more detail?

>as loud as a stapned of elephant

3) Try write some examples of figurative language to describe the audience:

> A) Simile: the audience claps very loud

> B) Metaphor: the crowd is as loud as a concert

> C) Hyperbole: there louder than  a staped

4 )Try write some examples of figurative language to describe the girls pukana eyes.

> A) Simile:  the girls had very wide eyes like a colossal squid

> B) Metaphor:  the girls eyes shone brighter then the sun

> C) Hyperbole:the girls eyes shone brighter then the sun

5) Try write some examples of figurative language to describe how Te Ata feels when he feels sick.

> A) Simile: he feels as sick as a dog

> B) Metaphor: he's sick niss is bigger than a elephant

> C) Hyperbole: he's sick niss is bigger than a elephant