One day an ape was going about his business. When he noticed a security guard had fallen over, without thinking he ran towards the guard wondering what had happened, To be surprised by the sight of a fire rifle. The ape picked the rifle up pulling the trigger and killing the guard, Dropping the gun the ape noticed a shining set of keys in the guards pocket, The ape picks the keys up and hesitantly walked towards the gate were the lock was, he slowly push the key in and turned it “Click” click went the lock echoing everywhere waking others. When the gate opens it creeks giving a loud noise alerting the other guards. But? It was too late the apes had escaped slowly and surely gaining power to learn how to steal and fight.The next day the apes had taken over town making people angry at the zoo they had been kept in. As they took over town by town they also went zoo to zoo releasing their fellow ape friends and family and overpowering the humans and slowly taking over the world.
Kia ora Kahurangi,
ReplyDeleteI really like your attention to detail as you describe the events that led up to your main character (an ape) escaping from the zoo into the local township e.g. hesitantly walks towards the gate - I have a really clear idea in my head of how the ape is moving in this moment. Well done, Kahurangi! Do you think apes could really take over the world?