WALT write using the structure of a narrative.
Robots are not known for bush walks. But one day a robot called Robo decided to go for a bush walk. He went for the walk to get some fresh air. He felt that he could no longer handle the hustle and bustle of the city.
As he walked he thought about things and wondered if he would live a better life in the bush. Off the grid. He kept walking and thinking about this. He walked for sometime, then realised he was lost. Robo tried to calm himself down. He said to himself “Deep breaths Robo, deeeeep breaths”. Now Robo was known for some anger issues, but somehow Robo did manage to stay calm.
It was getting dark. Robo knew he was going to have to stay the night. So he made a pile of leaves to keep himself warm and dry.
One thing Robo was not fond of is insects but he had gotten used to them overnight. The insects that he hated the most were spider’s and fire ants.
When he woke in the morning he felt cold and hungry. Hungry as if he had no food and he would pass out.
Robots are not known for bush walks. But one day a robot called Robo decided to go for a bush walk. He went for the walk to get some fresh air. He felt that he could no longer handle the hustle and bustle of the city.
As he walked he thought about things and wondered if he would live a better life in the bush. Off the grid. He kept walking and thinking about this. He walked for sometime, then realised he was lost. Robo tried to calm himself down. He said to himself “Deep breaths Robo, deeeeep breaths”. Now Robo was known for some anger issues, but somehow Robo did manage to stay calm.
It was getting dark. Robo knew he was going to have to stay the night. So he made a pile of leaves to keep himself warm and dry.
One thing Robo was not fond of is insects but he had gotten used to them overnight. The insects that he hated the most were spider’s and fire ants.
When he woke in the morning he felt cold and hungry. Hungry as if he had no food and he would pass out.
But nothing was stopping him from getting back to the city. he was determined to make it back that was the only thing he was worried about and the food, and getting hyperthermia?.
He was pulling his way through the leaves when he came across a bush walking track, he stopped and thought for a moment then realized that was the track he had walked on before he had gotten lost.
Now he was even more confident that he would make it back to the city he pulled and pulled until he had reached the city, a big smile grew on his face.
Another robot had spotted him and rang an ambulance, when the ambulance arrived he was in a circle state.
Later on Robo died at the hospital he will be known for his bravery and for being a true adventurer.
Now he was even more confident that he would make it back to the city he pulled and pulled until he had reached the city, a big smile grew on his face.
Another robot had spotted him and rang an ambulance, when the ambulance arrived he was in a circle state.
Later on Robo died at the hospital he will be known for his bravery and for being a true adventurer.
Task Description: We had to try and write like Paul Jennings i try'd my best and hope you enjoy
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