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Stance 1 SUPPORTIVE of Rona blaming Marama for tripping up and breaking Rona’s calabash. Justify your stance. Make notes below | Stance 2 UNSUPPORTIVE of Rona blaming Marama for Justify your stance. Make notes for below | |
Point 1 - | Point 1 - Rona should be watching where she is going. | |
Point 2 - | Point 2 - Rona should of memorized the track since she walked/ran the track many times before | |
Point 3 - | Point 3 -Since she was running she should of be careful | |
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Point 5 - | Point 5 - | |
Choose your TWO MOST PERSUASIVE POINTS. For each point, expand your notes from above into a full statement. Add supporting details or evidence to each reason, in 1-2 more sentences. | ||
Reason statement 1 Rona was running, when her track was darkened from a cloud which had blocked the light of the moon. | Supporting details/evidence The cloud blocked the light of the moon darkening the track causing her to trip and break her calabash. | |
Reason statement 2 Rona continued to run the track even with poor light. Tripped and fell a couple more times and blamed the moon. | Supporting details/evidence If the parth darkened Rona should have slowed down because she can't see. | |
Write a maximum of 2 paragraphs to present your TWO most convincing reasons. | ||
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Kia ora Kahurangi,
ReplyDeleteYou have done some solid planning for your writing this week. I think you could combine the two paragraphs you have written to persuade your reader of why Rona should not have been running. What could you next reason/point to convince someone that Rona should not have blamed Marama for her accident?